Wednesday, December 19, 2012

final installation of the new croco-diamond story

I'm le tired but finished the croco-diamond story. Got 3 hours of sleep last night. Ending is cheesy but remember it's a story for kids.



And so the croco-diamond began reading the story, though his glasses had fallen off. Since croco-diamonds don’t have ears they can’t wear glasses. And Marie had noticed that the glasses somewhat resembled the glasses of the head mistress. She put her head down on her desk and hoped they weren’t the head mistress’ glasses.
“One day, the man (“who claimed to want to watch the chrysalis turn into a butterfly”, the croco-diamond added), noticed the chrysalis struggling in its cocoon. It was trying to escape (“to be born as a butterfly, we can presume, otherwise why leave the comfort and convenience of a cocoon – the inside of a cocoon is soft and warm, like sleeping in cotton candy, if cotton candy wasn’t sticky”). So the man wondered if he should he help the chrysalis escape the cocoon.
I might add at this point, children, that helping people obviously results in tragic consequences as related through the story of my uncle and the button. Surely there is a moment of happiness when one sees a butterfly emerge in all its glory, but really, should one help people? Because we have no idea what’s in the cocoon. It could be a trick. In the cocoon there could be a spider PRETENDING to be a butterfly. After all, this was just a random cocoon the man found in the woods. And frankly, he doesn’t strike me as being very bright.
I don’t like spiders at all. I remember once…”
“It’s a butterfly. It’s a STORY ABOUT A BUTTERFLY.” Said Ms. Kaeli.
“If you insist.” Said the croco-diamond. “Well, there is also the concern of  disappointment. After all, it may be a speckled wood butterfly that emerges from the cocoon. I don’t find them particularly attractive. But I do admire colorful butterflies such as the Rusty-tipped page, the Australian painted lady, the purple spotted swallowtail, the blue morpho, the peacock...”
There was a noise from the back of the room, near the fish tank, which sounded like Ms. Kaeli sneezing, except the sneeze, instead of sounding like AH-CHOO, sounded like “quinoa snacks”.
“Carrying on,” said the croco-diamond nervously. “The man decided to help the chrysalis from the cocoon. He was about to cut the cocoon open, when, suddenly, a voice spoke:
DO NOT CUT THE COCOON! THE CHRYSALIS WILL BE INJURED! LEAVE IT ALONE!”
The croco-diamond picked his (or maybe the school mistress’s) glasses up from where they had fallen on the floor. He held them in what he hoped was a scholarly way, between two fingers.
“Now children, it appears this man, who steals cocoons and does other bad things that we can only imagine, is now hearing voices in his head. I must question whether this narrator is, what is the polite term? Crazy. I once thought I heard a voice, which said “help me, help me!” But it turns out it was my brother, who had crawled up the drainage pipe on the side of our house, and, having just eaten a large meal of brussel sprouts, had gotten himself stuck due to his tummy full of gas.
Well, we sent for the croco-doctor, who told my brother to burp to release the air to shrink his stomach so that he might get out of the pipe. The house began to rattle with each burp, as if a terrible storm was happening. Or maybe an earthquake. Soon the shingles were falling off the roof and the china cabinet almost…”
A quinoa snack splattered on the black board directly behind the croco-diamond. None saw who threw it.
“Let’s see. I’ve lost my place.” Said the croco-diamond, fumbling with the book anxiously. “Oh yes, “And so the man did not help the chrysalis. He watched for days as the butterfly struggled to be born. It seemed as if it would never succeed.
And then one day the man awoke to find a beautiful butterfly.”
The croco-diamond paused, set the book in his lap, absently scratched his nose, and then said, “This is the worst story I’ve ever read. The plot is quite boring. The narrator is at best crazy and likely imagining this whole episode. Finding a cocoon in the woods? Preposterous! I can’t help but to think of better books I’ve read, such as the poggly woggly adventure series, book four in particular, where the poggly wogglys encounter a pirate ship made of peanut butter and jelly that is set to attack! Thinking fast, they turn their surf boards into a knife of sorts and gather all of the bread in their village…”
There was a sound from the back of the room, as if someone was covering her mouth and screaming. All turned and looked to the back of the room.
“The pirates, as it turns out, were made from marshmallows and were easily defeated by the poggly wogglys. I will now turn things back over to Ms. Kaeli,” said the croco-diamond, who might have realized Ms. Kaeli was upset about something. Though he couldn’t think what might have upset her.
Ms. Kaeli was resting on the bean bags in the back of the room, and appeared to be quite worn out although it was not even lunch time yet.
 “What do you think the moral of the story is?” she asked the croco-diamond.
 “The…moral?” asked the croco-diamond.
“The lesson. What can we learn from the man who let the chrysalis struggle to become a butterfly?”
“Well. First we can learn that if one hears a voice that doesn’t seem to be coming from anywhere, and one doesn’t have a burping brother caught in a drain pipe, that one is possibly crazy. And not as in ‘Johan goes crazy and throws toys’ way. I mean certifiably mad.
Once in my village there was a man who went to Varenham’s Finest Foods with three cats on his head. The cats were named Eenie, Meenie, and Miney. The man would pretend he had gone to Varenham’s to buy pumpkins, even though, I might add, it was NOT Halloween. And, I remember now, he had large green galoshes, the old fashioned type with the hooks on the front, and he would ask for…”
“Mr. Croco-diamond, please answer the question.”
“But I can’t because I feel faint just now, thinking about those cats. One cat, Eenie, no, it was definitely Meenie, no, perhaps it was Miney, used to ask the poor croco-didis “are you a member of the push in the bush club?” The croco-didi would say “Why no, I am not a member of such a club as you’ve mentioned. I’ve never heard of it.” Which, of course, would be the polite thing to say. The cat, Eenie, Meenie, or Miney, I can’t remember, would push the croco-didi into a bush! Why, the shrubbery in the whole town was being destroyed!”
The croco-diamond fell, rather dramatically, to the floor, curled into a ball, and said “Oh! You evil cats! Eenie, Meenie, and Miney!”
Marie raised her hand. “I think I know what the moral is.”
“Tell us.” Said Ms. Kaeli.
“The moral of the story is that sometimes you have to let people struggle and not help them so they can become the person they are meant to be. The chrysalis would not have become a beautiful butterfly if the man had helped it.”
“PRECISELY WHAT I’VE SAID ALL ALONG!” declared the croco-diamond, suddenly recovering from his remembrance of Eenie, Meenie, and Miney and leaping to his feet from the floor. “One must never help people! You’ll only fall into an abysm, be attacked by cats, and then the spiders will come…”
“Croc,” said Marie. “Sometimes you are so ridiculous. Of course you can help people. You just have to know when to help them.”
“Marie,” said the croco-diamond, “you are very wise. I have learned something from you today. Now, how about a warm bowl of soup. I’m positively famished!”
And so all the children ate soup, and didn’t have to eat quinoa snacks, and the croco-diamond surprised everyone with fresh dragon fruit for dessert. Though, some of the dragon fruit had lint on it from a ball of yarn the croco-diamond had put in his picnic basket.
“I HAD to bring the yarn.” The croco-diamond explained.  “One never knows when one may need some emergency knitting.”
Johan was allowed to keep the croco-diamond’s bongos. The head mistress retrieved her glasses (as it turns out, the croco-diamond had mistaken them for his part of his secret agent disguise, which he found in his picnic basket while retrieving the dragon fruit). And Ms. Kaeli said that the croco-diamond could come back to school again, for story time.
 After lunch Marie, wrapped in the croco-diamond’s sash, fell asleep on the bean bags while the croco-diamond picked up all the toys.
And he did it very quietly.

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